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to be loved. by ~Teffie:iconTeffie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Cheap or Tawdry Romance > Open


i've been walking this same path since yesterday
trying to erase my tracks
trying to captivate
the only thing that i have left.
trying to demonstrate
how easy it could be
to wake up some day, not today
and realize your life was just a dream
to remember the things that were lost
material things didn't bother me
feelings didn't bother me
but you bother me.
i want to wake up
and realize that you aren't real
and that i'm not real enough to have your name.
©2008 ~Teffie
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Submitted: May 6
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okay, so.
i want you all to shut up.
basically, this is just some shitty poem
that i decided to write because i was re reading loveless

this is ritsuka talking about himself from like 2 years ago
and obviously soubi.

if i don't get anything from this, i'm just taking it off.

(c)
series;yun kōga
production; me

idk, theres no music today.

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~myrandomfgt:iconmyrandomfgt: May 6, 2008, 5:39:55 PM
*shifty eyes*
I find this lovely.
If only things like this could happen, eh?

I love it.

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myRANDOM™
~Teffie:iconTeffie: May 6, 2008, 5:40:42 PM
lol thank you so much.

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WHAT? CAN'T HEAR YOU!
PLEASE LET ME LOOK AT YOUR ASS;
plus your nipples are bleeding through your tanktop.
~myrandomfgt:iconmyrandomfgt: May 6, 2008, 5:41:16 PM
It's no problem. :3

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myRANDOM™
~Kenyahp666:iconKenyahp666: May 7, 2008, 1:07:43 PM
I actually really like this.

sad i dont know what series its written about...

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The good writers touch life often. The mediocre ones run a quick hand over her. The bad ones rape her and leave her for the flies.-Ray Bradbury's Fahrenheit 451
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